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RETRO ROLLERS
- 3:50 pm
- Sunday
- October 18, 2026
The Weekly Gaucho
Glendale Community College
Hi Zakiah! I like the whole idea of Retro Rollers. A monthly subscription of rollerskates is an idea I do not think I would ever be able to come up with on my own. It is super creative! I wanted to ask, where would this advertisement be posted? Is it something you would find on a social media platform, or were you imagining it to come from a magazine of some kind? In my opinion, you have a really strong headline here. “Stop Scrolling, Start Rolling” is not only catchy and easy to remember, but it also provides viewers with a problem and solution right off the bat. Many people struggle with being stuck on their phones, especially students with nothing better to do because they are on summer break. Since you place a lot of emphasis on summer fun, I am assuming that group is largely who this advertisement is catering to. The about us section in the ad gives some interesting details that set you apart from other companies. The unique products are the vintage style quad skates. The service of having those products delivered directly to a customer’s location on a monthly basis is also unique. You also emphasised the product’s benefits: stress-free fun. Then, to wrap it up, you directed customers to your website. This is a really solid format. The only feedback I can possibly think of, and this is more nitpicking than anything content related, is maybe next time you could adjust your visuals a bit so the fonts are a little easier to read. Making the background visuals take up less page space, or have the text be written over a single, solid color block would probably help with this a bit. I struggled with the same issue so I know it’s really annoying. Regardless, amazing work! Have a good one!